I'm sorry but I have to comment on every one of them individually. Otherwise you'd only get a "they were all amazing, you're a writing goddess", which is fine but I also like to leave proper feedback, not just my fangirl reactions.
1. Clarity First of all, I love how Gerard lurk them with the promise of a Star Wars marathon like the total dork he is. Poor Frank, feeling exclude when Gerard and Brian started to make out. But of course he was more than happy to stay and be a part of it, he's anything but stupid. Oh Gerard, with your tattoo fetish that I both share and approve. Well, more specifically, tiny tattooed guys fetish. HE'S GLAD HE'S SOBER BECAUSE HE'S ABLE TO FEEL IT ALL AND WILL BE ABLE TO REMEMBER IT AS WELL!!! Well I'm glad you wrote it because I'd be able to read it over, and over again.
2. Territory I LOVE SLIGHTLY-ACCIDENTAL FIRST TIMES! (and I say slightly because obviously Frank had been planning it for a while but hadn't been successful). Long-suffering Bob! Trying to push Frank out but not really! BTW, I'm so glad you used the "Bob ow! Bob my head!" quote because I can hear Frank's voice and it makes it more real, which makes me more happy *tinhat*.
And it's really highly inconvenient that the magazine Bob was reading (which is now crumpled beneath Frank's ass) is not the latest issue of Modern Drummer, but rather something with a more adult bent. hahahaha Frank interrupted Bob's special bunk time!
I LOVE YOU, YOU WROTE BOB/FRANK AND I LOVED IT AND I LOVE LIFE IN GENERAL.
3. The Friday Night Routine: You know you're a great writer when you make your readers laugh uncontrollably as if they were able to actually hear Frank and Mikey's fits of laughter. Or maybe your readers are total and complete loosers and that's why they couldn't stop laughing (very likely as well). Also, this: the saddest attempt at wrestling ever seen in the modern world. was an amazing icing on a hilarious cake. P.S. THEY'RE BOTH LESBIANS LOL!
4. Picking Up I loved this, so bittersweet and just lovely. Poor Mikey, the part where he was a drunken-crying mess broke my heart; and fucking bravo to Mike for not having taken advantage of that. And because good things come for those who wait, he got a grown, confident Mikey who not only remembers but wants to take off were they'd left.
I have to go now, but I'll come back later with my comment for the rest of the fics. Unless you don't want/need me to comment on all of them (which I understand, this comment is long enough as it is).
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I'm sorry but I have to comment on every one of them individually. Otherwise you'd only get a "they were all amazing, you're a writing goddess", which is fine but I also like to leave proper feedback, not just my fangirl reactions.
1. Clarity
First of all, I love how Gerard lurk them with the promise of a Star Wars marathon like the total dork he is.
Poor Frank, feeling exclude when Gerard and Brian started to make out. But of course he was more than happy to stay and be a part of it, he's anything but stupid.
Oh Gerard, with your tattoo fetish that I both share and approve. Well, more specifically, tiny tattooed guys fetish.
HE'S GLAD HE'S SOBER BECAUSE HE'S ABLE TO FEEL IT ALL AND WILL BE ABLE TO REMEMBER IT AS WELL!!! Well I'm glad you wrote it because I'd be able to read it over, and over again.
2. Territory
I LOVE SLIGHTLY-ACCIDENTAL FIRST TIMES! (and I say slightly because obviously Frank had been planning it for a while but hadn't been successful).
Long-suffering Bob! Trying to push Frank out but not really!
BTW, I'm so glad you used the quote because I can hear Frank's voice and it makes it more real, which makes me more happy *tinhat*.
hahahaha Frank interrupted Bob's special bunk time!
I LOVE YOU, YOU WROTE BOB/FRANK AND I LOVED IT AND I LOVE LIFE IN GENERAL.
3. The Friday Night Routine:
You know you're a great writer when you make your readers laugh uncontrollably as if they were able to actually hear Frank and Mikey's fits of laughter. Or maybe your readers are total and complete loosers and that's why they couldn't stop laughing (very likely as well).
Also, this:
was an amazing icing on a hilarious cake.
P.S. THEY'RE BOTH LESBIANS LOL!
4. Picking Up
I loved this, so bittersweet and just lovely. Poor Mikey, the part where he was a drunken-crying mess broke my heart; and fucking bravo to Mike for not having taken advantage of that.
And because good things come for those who wait, he got a grown, confident Mikey who not only remembers but wants to take off were they'd left.
I have to go now, but I'll come back later with my comment for the rest of the fics. Unless you don't want/need me to comment on all of them (which I understand, this comment is long enough as it is).