Okay, okay, first of all: MIKEY GIGGLES AFTER HE ORGASMS. He GIGGLES, Fox. Mikey. Who has the same voice tone and facial expression for every sentiment, GIGGLES AFTER HE COMES. I realize this was probably an unimportant detail, considering you wrote sex-pollen!Patrick, but it's just too precious and perfect and fantastic not to mention it and flail over it.
Now that that's out of my system... JESUS CHRIST WOMAN, I'M SURPRISED YOUR KEYBOARD DIDN'T MELT WHILE YOU WERE TYPING THIS. It's so fucking hot; Patrick's animalistic NEED, and Pete feeling conflicted because he knows Patrick's not acting normally, but at the same time he obviously NEEDS it, and Pete's been wanting him for so long, but what if Patrick gets too ashamed when whatever's happening to him is over and never speaks to Pete again? (longest sentence in the history of sentences) And Mikeyway always getting it, without Pete having to explain; and being so zen about it, like it's a common occurrence for him to have to cure people from sex pollen.
The actual sex was obviously and unsurprisingly hot, because your porn always is; but it amazes me that you managed to keep the hotness constant, one scene didn't feel weaker than the other, or repetitive, which is a hard thing to accomplish when writing this many words of pure and unapologetic porn.
Now off to read part 2. (Okay, in all honesty, I could've waited and commented on the whole thing after part 2, but I needed the break to cool off a little bit! I'M NOT A TEENAGER ANYMORE FOX, I NEED RECOVERY PERIODS, I CAN'T HAVE PORN-READING MARATHONS WITHOUT BREAKS, OKAY?)
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Now that that's out of my system... JESUS CHRIST WOMAN, I'M SURPRISED YOUR KEYBOARD DIDN'T MELT WHILE YOU WERE TYPING THIS. It's so fucking hot; Patrick's animalistic NEED, and Pete feeling conflicted because he knows Patrick's not acting normally, but at the same time he obviously NEEDS it, and Pete's been wanting him for so long, but what if Patrick gets too ashamed when whatever's happening to him is over and never speaks to Pete again? (longest sentence in the history of sentences) And Mikeyway always getting it, without Pete having to explain; and being so zen about it, like it's a common occurrence for him to have to cure people from sex pollen.
The actual sex was obviously and unsurprisingly hot, because your porn always is; but it amazes me that you managed to keep the hotness constant, one scene didn't feel weaker than the other, or repetitive, which is a hard thing to accomplish when writing this many words of pure and unapologetic porn.
Now off to read part 2. (Okay, in all honesty, I could've waited and commented on the whole thing after part 2, but I needed the break to cool off a little bit! I'M NOT A TEENAGER ANYMORE FOX, I NEED RECOVERY PERIODS, I CAN'T HAVE PORN-READING MARATHONS WITHOUT BREAKS, OKAY?)