THIS IS AWESOME AND I'M NOT DONE YET. (And if I comment as I go I'll remember all the things I like so...) This is so going to be a rambling review of nonsense. But the important part is I LOVE IT.
~PART ONE~
Patrick and his noises. Poor baby. Poor Pete. Because who can resist Patrick on a normal day let alone one determined to get sexytime?
Pete treating Mikey like he's in charge is insanely hot for some reason. In this context. Normally not my thing...mostly because it's Mikey? idk. This though. Nggggh.
Pete/Patrick is THE OTP. The fact that Pete feels like he needs Mikey's permission somewhere in this? Sort of adorable.
"Pete has to be the Patrick this time. It's Pete's turn to play care-taker and he has no idea how. Ow. Break my heart why don't you? Oh, boys. ♥
MIKEYWAY. And his CALM. How is he real? And the fact that this is utterly believable as the way he'd react just makes it more amusing.
"Breathe through your nose," Mikey says and Pete can't see past Patrick's pelvis but he can hear the smirk in Mikey's voice. He reaches one hand up from Patrick's hip to flip Mikey the bird, but he does suck in a long nasal breath at the reminder. *dies a little at the funny*
"Mikey, what are you doing?" Pete's voice comes out breathlessly.
"Helping," Mikey says, and Pete cranes his neck far enough to finally see how Mikey's bent over Patrick's ass, one hand hidden between Patrick's cheeks, a look of intent concentration on his sharp features. Pete knows immediately why Patrick's moaning, because Mikey's fingers are long and he's really fucking good with them. X_X *blinks* *blinks some more* I think my brain just shut off from HOT.
Oh, wow. Mikey/Patrick bits? Blowing my mind. Never really considered that one. Definitely A+ material that. Good job. I think the threesome aspect is what makes this fic though.
MIKEYWAY. TALKING. GUH.
Awwww, the cuddling. I <3 them. You write them really well, fyi.
ETA: Ahahaha, LJ just yelled at me that my comment is too long. Oops.
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~PART ONE~
Patrick and his noises. Poor baby. Poor Pete. Because who can resist Patrick on a normal day let alone one determined to get sexytime?
Pete treating Mikey like he's in charge is insanely hot for some reason. In this context. Normally not my thing...mostly because it's Mikey? idk. This though. Nggggh.
Pete/Patrick is THE OTP. The fact that Pete feels like he needs Mikey's permission somewhere in this? Sort of adorable.
"Pete has to be the Patrick this time. It's Pete's turn to play care-taker and he has no idea how. Ow. Break my heart why don't you? Oh, boys. ♥
MIKEYWAY. And his CALM. How is he real? And the fact that this is utterly believable as the way he'd react just makes it more amusing.
"Breathe through your nose," Mikey says and Pete can't see past Patrick's pelvis but he can hear the smirk in Mikey's voice. He reaches one hand up from Patrick's hip to flip Mikey the bird, but he does suck in a long nasal breath at the reminder. *dies a little at the funny*
"Mikey, what are you doing?" Pete's voice comes out breathlessly.
"Helping," Mikey says, and Pete cranes his neck far enough to finally see how Mikey's bent over Patrick's ass, one hand hidden between Patrick's cheeks, a look of intent concentration on his sharp features. Pete knows immediately why Patrick's moaning, because Mikey's fingers are long and he's really fucking good with them. X_X *blinks* *blinks some more* I think my brain just shut off from HOT.
Oh, wow. Mikey/Patrick bits? Blowing my mind. Never really considered that one. Definitely A+ material that. Good job. I think the threesome aspect is what makes this fic though.
MIKEYWAY. TALKING. GUH.
Awwww, the cuddling. I <3 them. You write them really well, fyi.
ETA: Ahahaha, LJ just yelled at me that my comment is too long. Oops.