ext_188536 ([identity profile] alien-shex.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] ladyfoxxx 2009-10-06 01:08 pm (UTC)

ohh fuck this was so delicious and cute. I loved your descriptions of Gerard and how Frank just watched him at the end. It was amazing (L)
These type of fics are really my favorite, and you wrote it so well.
I also loved this part:

Except now there is no more Gerard pillow for Frank's head. No more falling asleep in Gerard's bed together talking shit. No more Gerard lighting Frank's cigarette and pulling it from his own lips to put in Frank's mouth. No more casual hand on his shoulder, leg, waist. No more crawling into Gerard's lap, brushing that floppy bit of hair out of his face to see those big hazel eyes.

I can totally see their relationship being like that in real life :), you captured it really well.

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