and the HIKING scene. Dude. DUDE. Okay, first: gerard in his little hiking outfit. ♥ Mikey all “he won’t wear a hat. :| :| :|” Gerard actualfax hiking. and dying. and Brian getting him to go the rest of the way up? Dude, okay: that so could have been silly or overwritten or unbelievable or over the top, but you SO COMPLETELY 100% NAILED IT, so hard I cannot even TAKE it. LIke, Brian was wheedling him, but not in a girly way, not in an unbelievable way, in a GUY way, in a way that I can hear and see and believe. And Gerard’s reaction - not all obvious HEART EYES OKAY YES but getting WORN DOWN and giving in to it without even believing he’s saying yes and then following Brian up there and thinking he is going to DIE, but doing it ANYWAY, and just just just - god, I LOVE this.
(oh, OH, and the relationship Gerard had with Pete, I just LOVED - the scene where he gives him the Black Parade script is one of my favorites!)
Seriously, dude, I would not have read it (OTPPPPPPPP Issues!) had we not talked about it in the bar, and I would have MISSED OUT, because you crafted this really amazing believable wonderful FUCKING HOT story (I have read that first scene between Gerard and Brian...many, many times at this point) and I am so fucking impressed with you and SO HAPPY I had it to read on my honeymoon. ♥______♥
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and the HIKING scene. Dude. DUDE. Okay, first: gerard in his little hiking outfit. ♥ Mikey all “he won’t wear a hat. :| :| :|” Gerard actualfax hiking. and dying. and Brian getting him to go the rest of the way up? Dude, okay: that so could have been silly or overwritten or unbelievable or over the top, but you SO COMPLETELY 100% NAILED IT, so hard I cannot even TAKE it. LIke, Brian was wheedling him, but not in a girly way, not in an unbelievable way, in a GUY way, in a way that I can hear and see and believe. And Gerard’s reaction - not all obvious HEART EYES OKAY YES but getting WORN DOWN and giving in to it without even believing he’s saying yes and then following Brian up there and thinking he is going to DIE, but doing it ANYWAY, and just just just - god, I LOVE this.
(oh, OH, and the relationship Gerard had with Pete, I just LOVED - the scene where he gives him the Black Parade script is one of my favorites!)
Seriously, dude, I would not have read it (OTPPPPPPPP Issues!) had we not talked about it in the bar, and I would have MISSED OUT, because you crafted this really amazing believable wonderful FUCKING HOT story (I have read that first scene between Gerard and Brian...many, many times at this point) and I am so fucking impressed with you and SO HAPPY I had it to read on my honeymoon. ♥______♥