ext_153797 ([identity profile] coricomile.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] ladyfoxxx 2010-06-29 06:24 pm (UTC)

Hi. Hi. Hi. Marry me?

So, there's so much that I want to say but I forgot a lot of it during the flailing hands at the end, so here's what I remember of my head commentary.

I will never get sick of tiny big shot Patrick. Ever. He was adorable and the right mix of professional and Patrick and sad and good at his job.

The Maddens as the evil corporate hacks! The Maddens, period.

Patrick and Pete being 'drunk'! On a beach! Mikey being the best little brother on the East Coast! Ryan being exasperated about being involved in Pete's fashion choices! Blatant dissing of Twilight! Pete starting a production company for Patrick!

The only thing I wish was cut out/was more of is Travis. He was mentioned and then. Forgotten.

But, oh, I loved this lots. I really felt like I was watching a film. The writing was cenimatic and quick, and I enjoyed all of it. I'm forgetting things, but this was just fantastic.

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