My love for Brian Schechter is EPIC and so few people write him well, or at all. I think you nailed his characterization perfectly! And although I prefer my Schechter with a side of Bryar, I think you did a great job of writing a very believable and interesting Brian/Gerard dynamic. Their names in Sharpie at the end was priceless! I think that Gerard and Bob's relationship was my favorite though:)

The secondary characters, especially Pete/Patrick, Bob, Mikey and Frank were AWESOME. There was so much going on in this story and you did a great job of tying it all together and weaving an action packed and interesting story. I have no idea if you are in or know a lot about the movie industry but you sure had me sold!