jeeeesus christ. that was smokin' oh my god. i can't even. i love the rawness of this; how it's not pretty but it's dirty and sexy and filthy. it's got epic descriptions and it's gritty and gorgeous without the metaphors and fancy details. i adored this. it was hot and imperfect and wonderful.

i want to give you all my girl!au ideas and make you write them. you are clearly amazing at it. this was stunning. *gushes*