Oh hi, this is GORGEOUS. As soon as it started, all about Gerard full of adrenaline from singing his heart out and Frank vibrating with it next to him, I was in love. This 'verse has such a great energy to it, and you harness that perfectly. And Gerard's POV, tinged with sadness (before the world fell apart and his life filled with ghosts) but desperate to find that hope again, and finding it in Frank--it is completely perfect.
And seriously, SERIOUSLY, I love the way you work in their families. Jamia! Frank's family including all of them, oh my goodness. He is so full of love, I imagine him sort of holding them all together. ♥
Okay, and then of course the Trans Am porn--SO GOOD. All the friction and heat and desperation, that's what this 'verse is MADE FOR. I can just see them like this in the wide open desert, letting themselves stop worrying about the dangers and just give in to their wanting, right then. And then Frank saying "Make some fucking noise," that couldn't be more perfect.
And just, your writing overall--there are so many gorgeous images, fantastic lines, it's so...tuned in and sensual and immediate. I loved this so much. ♥
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And seriously, SERIOUSLY, I love the way you work in their families. Jamia! Frank's family including all of them, oh my goodness. He is so full of love, I imagine him sort of holding them all together. ♥
Okay, and then of course the Trans Am porn--SO GOOD. All the friction and heat and desperation, that's what this 'verse is MADE FOR. I can just see them like this in the wide open desert, letting themselves stop worrying about the dangers and just give in to their wanting, right then. And then Frank saying "Make some fucking noise," that couldn't be more perfect.
And just, your writing overall--there are so many gorgeous images, fantastic lines, it's so...tuned in and sensual and immediate. I loved this so much. ♥