Hey so I'm like eleven million years late but HI THERE, THANK YOU! I treasure your feedback so much, not just because you take the time to write such good thorough feedback but also because you're awesome and I want to be you when I grow up. So I'm sorry it took me so long, but dude I just want to roll around in this comment forever.
Ugh, I LOVE that you zeroed in on the picket fences line. I pretty much wrote the whole fic so I could write that line - ask shiningartifact she helped me plot it (the tiny piece of plot that there is, anyway).
The family side of things was so important for me, I don't know WHY I am going poly with this 'verse, it's FORCING me to and it was so important to me that it worked, because all they've got now is each other, they ARE their family now.
But god yes, this verse, thigh holsters and desert chases demand hot fucking-on-the-car-hood porn and I'm stoked that you liked it, that you could hear it and feel it and the boys were in there being all desperate and demanding.
I don't think I'll be able to stop writing this verse. I have at least one more in me and it's 10K already and it wants to be fucking origin-fic. HI, I AM INSANE.
YOU ARE AWESOME AND YOU GET ALL MY HEARTS. ALL OF THEM.
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Ugh, I LOVE that you zeroed in on the picket fences line. I pretty much wrote the whole fic so I could write that line - ask
The family side of things was so important for me, I don't know WHY I am going poly with this 'verse, it's FORCING me to and it was so important to me that it worked, because all they've got now is each other, they ARE their family now.
But god yes, this verse, thigh holsters and desert chases demand hot fucking-on-the-car-hood porn and I'm stoked that you liked it, that you could hear it and feel it and the boys were in there being all desperate and demanding.
I don't think I'll be able to stop writing this verse. I have at least one more in me and it's 10K already and it wants to be fucking origin-fic. HI, I AM INSANE.
YOU ARE AWESOME AND YOU GET ALL MY HEARTS. ALL OF THEM.