Oh man, this was AWESOME. I can't get over how brilliant it is how you merged the real world with the Killjoys universe. It made it so fucking terrifying, you know? Like, normally Killjoys is this TOTALLY AU universe, separate from reality, but linking them how you did gives it all so much more weight. Frank is seeing what is ACTUALLY GOING TO HAPPEN to HIS world (well, unless he saves it :D) and that is so so chilling.
So basically all of that gave this story this real sense of urgency, how there is so much at stake, even though it all started with Frank and Gerard messing around with their time travel. The sex was all SO HOT, oh my god. I definitely reread some of those scenes, ha. But right, beyond the porn, you did such an amazing job with how all of this must have affected Frank emotionally--like his relationship to Gerard, it was so well done, oh my god. Finding out they end up together, but not yet in his timeframe, how meaningful all of his time with future Gerard is because he's not supposed to get with HIS Gerard for years yet...ugh, my HEART.
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So basically all of that gave this story this real sense of urgency, how there is so much at stake, even though it all started with Frank and Gerard messing around with their time travel. The sex was all SO HOT, oh my god. I definitely reread some of those scenes, ha. But right, beyond the porn, you did such an amazing job with how all of this must have affected Frank emotionally--like his relationship to Gerard, it was so well done, oh my god. Finding out they end up together, but not yet in his timeframe, how meaningful all of his time with future Gerard is because he's not supposed to get with HIS Gerard for years yet...ugh, my HEART.
This was just such a satisfying story, YAY. :D!