Yay thank you! I'm so happy you liked the blending of the two worlds. You're right it totally raises the stakes, KNOWING what it is they Frank stands to lose/has lost, knowing his world and all that he has. I'm so glad you feel like I gave that idea justice.
You are not the first person to commen on how it starts fairly light and gets heavier, it totally wrote ITSELF like that, I swear. I'm happy you liked the porn, since that was what got me writing the story in the first place, though in the end I kind of fell in love with the verse as a whole so it became more than just a bunch of excuses for improbable porn.
I'm so glad you liked the Frank-knowing-about-their-relationship thing. I fell in love with the idea of him knowing what was to come and really hanging for it, taking as much as he can out of his time with Gerard NOW because he knows he'll have to wait.
What a lovely review. Thank you SO MUCH for letting me know you liked it darling!
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You are not the first person to commen on how it starts fairly light and gets heavier, it totally wrote ITSELF like that, I swear. I'm happy you liked the porn, since that was what got me writing the story in the first place, though in the end I kind of fell in love with the verse as a whole so it became more than just a bunch of excuses for improbable porn.
I'm so glad you liked the Frank-knowing-about-their-relationship thing. I fell in love with the idea of him knowing what was to come and really hanging for it, taking as much as he can out of his time with Gerard NOW because he knows he'll have to wait.
What a lovely review. Thank you SO MUCH for letting me know you liked it darling!