Wow this is an amazing review. Thank you SO much for going into such detail and letting me know specifically what you liked, it's so great to hear.
I'm glad the sex worked for you but I'm SO very glad the rest did too, the characterisations, relationships, interactions - writing a long story with a lot of plot is not a usual thing for me so it's really reassuring to hear those aspects worked for you.
I couldn't believe my luck when Frank made that tweet. It was so perfect for the fic - I was still finishing it at the time - and it just rang so true I knew I had to put it SOMEWHERE.
Oh and I'm SO glad you liked the Bob & Brian parts. I was particularly nervous about the way Brian fit into the plot, so that's a real relief that it worked for you.
Gosh thank you so much for being so generous with your words and reactions. I'm really stoked. Reviews like this really make it worth the effort. Thank you. <3
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I'm glad the sex worked for you but I'm SO very glad the rest did too, the characterisations, relationships, interactions - writing a long story with a lot of plot is not a usual thing for me so it's really reassuring to hear those aspects worked for you.
I couldn't believe my luck when Frank made that tweet. It was so perfect for the fic - I was still finishing it at the time - and it just rang so true I knew I had to put it SOMEWHERE.
Oh and I'm SO glad you liked the Bob & Brian parts. I was particularly nervous about the way Brian fit into the plot, so that's a real relief that it worked for you.
Gosh thank you so much for being so generous with your words and reactions. I'm really stoked. Reviews like this really make it worth the effort. Thank you. <3