ext_1260 ([identity profile] shinetheway.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] ladyfoxxx 2013-01-10 09:34 am (UTC)

I know it has a happy ending, I remember you talking about it. [grins] I just didn't expect this particular snippet of it to be quite so...complicated. But gorgeous. Seriously, there's just layers and layers here, and every time I reread it, well, hurts a bit but in a different way every time. And I flip back and forth between feeling worse for Frank and for Gerard. It's one of the few angsty scenarios where I can't really pick a side to sympathize with. There's no good guy and no bad guy, just two guys in pain/love/pain. I ache for them both.

But carnivorous vines on Frank's dick? For real? Owwwwwww....

AHAHAHAHA YES! And now you see why Frank crunches up to see, and then stares with outrage at Gerard, drawing with single-minded concentration and the tip of his tongue peeking out. And then grabs Gerard's hair, knocks the marker away, and drags him down. Gerard's closed mouth bounces off his dick, except then he opens his mouth to say WTF and Frank moves fast and Gerard's halfway down his dick (thank god the markers are nontoxic) and Frank lets himself thump back onto the bed with a sense of payback accomplished.

And Gerard goes "mmmph!" because THIS IS RUINING HIS ~ART and Frank goes "my dick was being eaten by PITCHER PLANTS, Gerard!" and Gerard goes "...okay, fair enough" except he's kinda into it now so it's just a peaceful sort of mmmmmmumblemumble and then Frank goes nnnnnnngh a lot and it basically ends up being the sort of vengeance that is enjoyed a great deal by both parties. :)

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